कान्हड़दे प्रबन्ध (कवि पद्मनाभ - जालोर चौहान वीरगाथा, अलाउद्दीन खिलजी से युद्ध व जौहर इतिहास)
Kanhadade Prabandha of Kavi Padmanabha with Commentary
कवि पद्मनाभ (सम्पादक: प्रो. कान्तिलाल बलदेवराम व्यास) द्वारा
पृष्ठ 331, कुल 354 में से
संदर्भ में पढ़ें१५४ कान्हडदे प्रबन्ध Khanda III Verse 106 सुरसिद्ध AB (H) is the original form, and gives better sense than सबि सुरासुर J, सुर सिव K. 109 विसरि K is the original reading > परसिरि B, सरसर H, समुर C, सिरि L, all mislections ; cf. III 93. 110 कीयो A pref. to करियो BH, करया L, for metrical reasons. 112 राइ em. (from राय BCDJL) for ending rhyme. कां सारउं (ABDJ) is the original reading > mislection का मारिउं C, and scribal emendations कां सारियुं H, कइ हारया K, वरास्या L. 114 म वालिसि BJ is the original reading > म लिसि A, म बलि K (a letter dropped out in each), स चालिसि H, a mislection. 123 नही AKL, (B) accepted; नुहि CJ is a contraction of न हुइ (cf. न हूउ D). 125 अंतरउ AL (B) is the proper OWR form; अंतर CDHK is a Sanskriti- zation of the same. 135 It is noteworthy how नि in पुरुपनि B (ACJ) was restored as नही [पुरुष नही] by DK (L). नांणू A pref. as a colloquial OWR contraction. 144 सांभलइ ADK pref. to सांसहि B (HL) as more suitable in the context. 153 फूटदी ए H adopted as giving better sense (cf. III 242); फूटकी रे D (B) also possible. 162 करइ A (C) adopted; रलइ (DKBJ) also possible. 167 सूठउ AD (CJ) pref. to छूटु B (L) as giving better sense. Note—It is difficult to determine whether 167 b existed in the original or not. 170 चाल्यउ A (BL) gives better sense than गयउ K (CDJ). 171 गोरहण A (BL) is the correct reading; घीजड CDJK is a corruption. (vide the next vs, III 172 b). 173 घाल्हीइ em. from DJK (ABC); (cf. II 16; III 220). 174 दीयूँ B (AL) is pref. to हूउं C (DJK); (cf. I 36). 180 जड़मल EK is the original reading > जमलि ABL, a mislection. 182 पुंजा A pref. to पोगा BDEJKL, as the proper OWR form; cf. III 192. 193 घेउ A adopted; however, घेय if recorded by any MS, would have been more suitable for rhyme (with हेम A, which is preferable to हेउ). 194 तुम्ह ABD pref.; तुझ JKL (E) also possible. 204 राउ C pref. to राय BDEJ as a proper OWR form. लाधउ K (BC) pref. to सीधउ L (EJ) as a verb with the sense of the passive will suit the context better. 208 कराविमु BD pref. as an earlier OWR form than कराविम AK(L). 215 वालिनुं D(B) is the original reading > mislections वाछिनु C, चालि गुं J, चालतउ L.